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  • Hello and welcome to another Isles video today.

  • We're looking at the results of the speaking contest that I held from my blawg last week.

  • If you find this video helpful, I encourage you to visit my blawg at I'll.

  • I'll start calm the aisles related chat website I'll stash chat dot com and the on line E S l classifieds website E s l meet dot com.

  • There were six people that entered last week's contest one from the Czech Republic, two from India, one from Japan, one from Uzbekistan and one from Vietnam.

  • And I would like to personally thank them for their bravery in sending recordings of their voices for us to analyze to date.

  • So I hope everybody can keep in mind that this is only supposed to be a helpful lesson.

  • I hope that nobody feels embarrassed regarding the comments that we make about them, because we're all here just to learn and improve our language skills and ultimately, our mark on the Isles examination.

  • Before we begin, I should state clearly that I am not an Isles examiner, nor am I associated with the British Council, I dp Australia nor the Esso Group at the University of Cambridge.

  • So the following are just my comments based on my experience as an isles instructor and as a native speaker of English.

  • So now, without further ado, let's get started.

  • Uh, I should explain how I went about gauging the various levels of these speakers, and I did so using the Eilts speaking band descriptors chart.

  • This is the public version that is made available from the aisles dot or GE website, and you can download it for yourself there, and I hope you do and use it.

  • Ah, while watching this video.

  • Now, let's just zoom in here and I'll explain a little bit about how this chart works.

  • So basically, what you can see on the left hand side is ah, Cole, um, for the band of these various topics to be assessed.

  • So the band starts at nine and, of course, goes all the way down to zero.

  • There are four broad categories that are assessed in this chart.

  • The first is fluency and coherence, which is basically a measure of how fluent and how, um, how easily understood the student is when speaking English.

  • The second column is Lexical Resources, which refers to the word choice and a choice of phrases that the speaker uses to express themselves and to speak about the different topics that they do.

  • Third is grammatical range and accuracy, and finally, the fourth is pronunciation.

  • So in assessing these students, I try to stick as closely to this church as I possibly could.

  • And I hope that the following is a fairly accurate representation of what these students what Mark these students would achieve on the examination, all six students responded to the same cue card and delivered a monologue that was not to exceed two minutes in length.

  • And the key occurred that I posted to my blawg and that the students responded to Is this describe a public place that you like?

  • Please say, Where is this place?

  • When do you go there?

  • Why do you go there?

  • What do you like about this place?

  • Okay.

  • And, uh, students responded to this and send me their MP three files.

  • Now, today I will present them in the order that they were received by me.

  • So the order is a little bit random.

  • We're not going based on skill, but rather I hope that as you listen, you can also, you know, look at the at the aisles speaking band descriptors chart, and also try to pinpoint where these students would place in the various areas to kind of, you know, strengthen your understanding of how, um, certain parts of a person's speech can increase their score on the exam.

  • So let's listen to the first recording.

  • This is from our friend in the Czech Republic, and I'll play it for you here, the place I have chosen to talk about a beautiful sandy beach near my house.

  • The beach is about one kilometers long in the north.

  • Them off Sabrina.

  • The speech is very popular for jogging or also for Walter Activity as a kind of thing.

  • Because the beach is meal by my place.

  • I can go there anytime during war year.

  • One of the reasons I like spending time on the beach.

  • It was planted view on the sea and the harbor.

  • It is also a wonderful place for me to relax and charge my energy.

  • Okay, so now this person's, um speaking is, as you can hear, is quite fluent, and I think that they they describe all four sections of this cue card.

  • Well, so if we just go over, you know, some of the different areas that that they could improve upon.

  • So, firstly, you know, you might have picked up on There were a few small grammatical issues as they were speaking, you know?

  • So, I mean, for example, at the very beginning, they mentioned this beach is one kilometers from their house, which, of course, you know that's a plural.

  • And we're talking about something singular.

  • So this should be one kilometer and as well, um, there is, you know, a modest misuse of articles in the students speaking.

  • And I think that this is kind of a trait for a lot of people.

  • You know, that, uh, that air of Slavic, um, you know, language, backgrounds.

  • So you know, often when they speak because their own native language does not have words like a and and the that sometimes they tend to use thes words incorrectly.

  • And I think we see a few examples of that in, uh in the students speaking here.

  • So they had mentioned in the northern part of or in the, you know, in the northern part of something.

  • I think that there was a missing article there.

  • I can go there any time during whole year.

  • That should be during the whole year.

  • And another example was it is also wonderful place for me to relax.

  • So here we should be saying it is also a wonderful place for me to relax.

  • But these small errors, they don't hurt the students.

  • You know the ability for us as listeners to understand the student.

  • So basically, the the coherence level of the students speaking is quite good.

  • I've just noted here, so you know, most of her speaking is quite coherent.

  • Uh, she mentioned something popular for jogging, and then a word.

  • I think it's as in kite surfing, but I I'm not sure that might have been a slight misuse of that word, too.

  • I couldn't quite make that out.

  • And ah, and then there was the one of the reasons I like spending time on this speech.

  • A splendid view on the sea.

  • So again, we understand what what this person is saying, but this should be one of the reasons I like spending time on this beach is it has a splendid view of the sea just to clarify it a little bit there.

  • But like I said, though, coherence was, uh was quite good.

  • Despite, you know, these small mistakes.

  • Now, looking at the band chart, I can see very clearly that this student's pronunciation is is about a six or slightly higher.

  • Uh, and I'm looking at, you know, if you look in this words has six we have can generally be understood throughout, though mispronunciation of injured individual words or sounds reduces clarity at times.

  • And I think that that's quite a fitting description for this student's speaking.

  • So for pronunciation, that would be roughly a six or perhaps a little bit higher.

  • But But around, you know, maybe 66.5 lexical resources.

  • The student students use of words and phrases are pretty good for most things.

  • They use appropriate wording, and they do not try to use overcomplicated vocabulary, which is another thing that I think students try to do often in their exams.

  • So they try to use, you know, words that are perhaps too complicated that they they, uh, they don't use them correctly or they used them out of context.

  • So, in an effort to try to sound perhaps more academic or or to try to impress their examiner.

  • They try to use, you know, very complicated wordings.

  • And and this is just out of context.

  • You know, if you're if you're talking about your favorite place to be, sometimes you don't need to to speak in this manner.

  • But this student doesn't do that, so that's good.

  • So there's appropriate wording for most things.

  • Okay, so for this student, I would guess roughly a six or perhaps a 6.5 of the highest for their speaking.

  • So thank you for that entry to you.

  • Now let's go on to our second, um, entrance in our contest.

  • This person is from India and I will play the recording.

  • The sense to me for you, I'm going to get aboard.

  • Is that a problem?

  • Is that most lately it is Australia Sydney Harbour Bridge.

  • It is in those Children's financial Captain Sidney City Central Business District to the Sickness Shores living door, straining the visa.

  • One we clean helpful on top with a hose, having the fact that it is one of the ways that gone for the better host.

  • I like that.

  • It's just this is because of the fact that related construction, would you be constructed in the considerable fighting?

  • Man City is 19 in mid 19 thirties.

  • What a terrible disease.

  • Considerably completely.

  • Broads.

  • What other thing that I most like The board is produced a panoramic views.

  • The words of the Sydney and other nearby iconic characters of this research is Okay, so, you know, basically, um, the student in their email to me, they they also mentioned that they were speaking in a low voice, which I think really makes it difficult to.

  • I understand, you know, a lot of what they're seeing.

  • So my common to the student is that the main problem with their speaking is coherence.

  • Um, they appear to be very fluent.

  • So, you know, there's the's speaking at at, uh, you know, quite a fast pace, and they don't seem to be pausing to think about what they're going to say next.

  • So I believe they're fluency is quite strong, and there is very, you know, there's almost no hesitation at all in there.

  • Speaking, they seem to be able to speak without having to pause, so that's good.

  • But the problem is that in the manner, the way that they're speaking makes them very difficult to understand.

  • And, you know, I, um honestly, I had to go back and listen to this recording a few times, too, you know, fully or to the best of my ability.

  • Comprehend what they were trying to say.

  • So I think that in terms of fluency, this person is is you know, they're quite fluent.

  • It sounds like it sounds like they have been speaking in this manner for many years.

  • But coherence is really, really weak.

  • And I think that there are some areas where, you know, um, it's it's difficult to even understand what they're saying.

  • So that's a problem that should be addressed.

  • Uh, and I think that the students coherence is affected by their pronunciation.

  • So, for example, they were mentioning things like the harbor.

  • Uh, and I you know, it's certain points.

  • I think they're ours.

  • Roll a little bit.

  • So, like, horrible hover bird.

  • No.

  • You know, this is just a horror harbor.

  • Uh, there was a portion where they mentioned which has been constructed in the something five decades back.

  • I'm not sure you know what that word or phrase was that they said at that point But though I have gone for the opera house, I like further Harbour Bridge, which is just nearby.

  • And you know all that part and they're talking about about the opera house and the harbour.

  • I was very confused, To be honest, I wasn't completely sure what the student was saying here.

  • Another thing.

  • They were mentioning something about the completely island, which I'm not sure what that meant.

  • And then also, there was a portion where they were talking about the panoramic view of the, um of Sydney.

  • Um, and the student also a number of times they put the an article before Sydney, which is a city, you know, the name of a city.

  • So that's a mistake.

  • We shouldn't be saying the Sydney.

  • Of course, if you're if you're saying the Sydney Opera House, yes, then we would use an article, but otherwise no.

  • So I think that, you know, coherence is that is the really the big thing there.

  • Now, if we talk for a bit about grammar, um, I think that the difficulty that the listener has an understanding this speaker is Nome or due to their poor pronunciation than due to their grammar or lexical resources because, you know, when I went back and I listened a few times to this to this speaker there.

  • If you listen very, very closely, they use a number of of you know, fairly accurate words in their lexical resource as they as the deliver there, Um, they're monologue, and there were a number of instances where their sentences, you know, we're fairly dramatically accurate too.

  • So I think that that these areas are not really that big of a problem.

  • But I just think that, you know, the clarity with which this person speaks needs to improve.

  • Okay, so and another thing just regarding their lexical resources, The student, you know, used a few impressive words like iconic when they were talking about certain things that you can see in Sydney.

  • So I thought that was that was interesting also a panoramic.

  • But unfortunately I think the pronunciation was a little bit difficult there.

  • So I think that this student would probably get around a five overall in there speaking, but you know as well the student was speaking in a very low voice.

  • So maybe if they were speaking in their in their regular voice, that would help.

  • But basically my comment would be to the student to focus on, you know, maybe slowing down the pace of their speaking and really articulating all the different words that they're trying to include in their response and to focus on improving the coherence of their speaking.

  • So thank you very much to that student for submitting that recording and good luck with your studies.

  • Now let's go to the third recording, which is also from India, and I'll play that for you.

  • Now it is well, I would like to strike, Do you a public place that I like to visit often, And that place is known as Salam Par, and this is a beautiful park in the center of the city, and it is located at around a distance off particular meters from my house, and it takes me around 30 minutes, 40 minutes to reach there by my own vehicle, and I go there most of the time with my family, and I go there mostly on the beacons.

  • But sometimes I like to go on the victors if I I can afford to find a time during the weekdays.

  • But that is less often and I go there just to relax myself, too.

  • The fresh Because the park is very beautifully built, the entrance of the park is like a castle, and it has many good things to attract Children and people of other rich groups, like there are many amusement rights and my dreams and other kinds off fun, fun things for people of all ages.

  • And there's a water park in the center that buck and what I like most about this place is the common to sitting atmosphere on beautifully beautiful election off the flowers and the park.

  • It's really well maintained by the government, and you can see a lot of people coming there in the evening time.

  • And I think that is the most attractive thing about this place, that you never feel alone whenever you go there.

  • I like to go there with my family, but sometimes I go there with my friends, too.

  • So overall, I think this student's speaking is is pretty good in many ways.

  • So, um, basically the listener, I can understand every main point that the speaker is talking about.

  • There are slight misunderstandings that may occur in certain parts, but this does not impede the The overall message that the student is, uh is imparting to their listener.

  • And I think that the students pace is quite good as well.

  • So they're not speaking extremely fast.

  • They're not speaking slow.

  • They're not.

  • They're not taking, you know, long, unnatural pauses.

  • There's, you know, they're speaking at a kind of a natural and comfortable speed.

  • So I think that really helps with the flu and seeing coherence of the overall recording.

  • So I think that's that's one area where the where the student is is is strong.

  • Now the lexical resources are also pretty good.

  • I'm sure you noticed, though there was some repetition in certain areas so that the students said, You know, when I go there, I go there with my family.

  • I go on the weekends, I go there to relax.

  • You know, there was a lot of go, go, go so that that was kind of, uh that was kind of repetitive.

  • The student also uses the word and quite a bit so and and then this.

  • This this and this.

  • This this end.

  • And that's a habit that the students, I'm sure can easily correct.

  • Now let's talk a bit about the grammar.

  • So there were certain sentences.

  • I'm sure you picked on up on some of them too.

  • Uh, where the grammar, You know, it hurts the meaning a little bit.

  • Makes a little a little bit more difficult for us to understand them.

  • So, for example, what I like most of all this place is the calm When I think what they meant was what I meant.

  • What I like most of all about this place is the calm.

  • And then whatever the calm nature of its or something, or, for example, you can see a lot of people coming there in the evening time.

  • And, you know, a common mistake that students make is is the use of come and the use of go so often when we use the word come, we're talking about a place that we are in at the moment s.

  • So I think that this student would probably be better to describe this using go.

  • So, uh, so you can see a lot of people going there in the evening time, because when she was doing the recording, she wasn't I don't think she was sitting in the middle of the park.

  • So this is this is a different place.

  • So she you know, she should be saying they go there Also the phrase evening time.

  • You know, typically, when we use evening, we don't follow it with time so you can see a lot of people going there in the evening.

  • Another comment I want to make is that students often use the phrase you can see a lot of people or you can see a lot of things and, um, often we can just replace this with something like there are So there are a lot of people who go there in the evening.

  • So, you know, don't don't be shy to do this because sometimes when we use, you can see a lot of, uh, it just sounds a little bit awkward.

  • I'm not sure.

  • Maybe if that's something that's that's a phrase that's commonly used in this person's native language.

  • But But maybe, you know, substituting this for there are would be a little bit less awkward s o.

  • If we talk about the pronunciation.

  • Um so the student, some of the students sentences sound a little bit like questions, and often people from within and backgrounds will, uh, you know what the end of their sentence is?

  • Their tone will go up a little bit.

  • And, you know, that can sound a little bit confusing to a native speaker because it often sort of implies, like a question of some kind.

  • So So, for example, that the students said, I feel calm when I go there in the center of the city.

  • You know, if we say that our sentences like this, it doesn't sound very native, I guess, is the best word.

  • So a way to fix this is, you know, to think about English as as in like, a stair.

  • So you're going down the stairs as you speak.

  • So I feel calm when I go there in the center of the city, you know, at the end of the sentence.

  • So we're kind of going down the stairs and then when?

  • If we're going to ask a question, then we you know, we would our tone would go up or if if we're, you know, connecting two ideas together with it with a conjunction.

  • So I will go there, or I will stay here so you can hear me going up in the middle and then and then coming down at the end.

  • But overall, though I thought the pronunciation really wasn't that bad.

  • We could understand what she was saying it at all times for the most part.

  • A few little points, though.

  • Be careful with the th So what?

  • When she was saying Go there, go there.

  • We don't want to start saying Go dare go Dare!

  • No, you know, make that th nice and clear Go there, Go there She used the word government at one point, and I felt the V was a little bit unclear.

  • So Gove Government, the w for flowers.

  • Be careful, not flowers.

  • It's flowers, flowers.

  • And there was one part where I couldn't pick up.

  • It was amusement rides and something, and it sort of sounded like toiletries.

  • But I wasn't sure what the what the stupid thing.

  • Amusement rides and something I couldn't pick up on that anyways.

  • Overall, I would imagine this student would get a six or 6.5 on there exam, Uh, and you'll see that in the aisle span descriptors chart.

  • There's a part that mentions may make frequent mistakes with complex structures, though these rarely cause comprehension problems, and I think that that sentence is very fitting of this student's response.

  • So, you know, we don't you know, it's not that we can't understand them.

  • It's just that they make some small mistakes in more complicated sentence structures.

  • So roughly six for 6.5, I would imagine so thank you very much for sending in that MP three file to me.

  • Now let's continue on to our next listener, our next guest speaker, who is from Japan.

  • Well, place is a place I like.

  • He is libraries, especially the library, which is located within five minutes walk from the house and was it was built 20 about 20 to 25 years ago when my family moved to the city.

  • I was in Elementary School Institute and then, and this has been my favorite place since then.

  • I usually go there when I have to study English reading and writing for the examination I R.

  • And there's this.

  • There's a small study room there, and it's very quiet, and so it's very convenient for me to concentrate on my study and work.

  • Unlike Oughta, municipal libraries, this library provides is with a range of, um Advanced Service's, including Internet connection via WiFi.

  • So I always bring my laptop there and connected to the Internet and try searching on the web.

  • Oh, searching the web.

  • This is one of the reasons I like this place very much.

  • Okay, So, uh, listening to this student, I think you can clearly hear that they are quite fluent.

  • And the tone that they use when they're speaking indicates that perhaps they have interacted with native speakers for quite a period of time.

  • So, uh, in terms of the fluency and coherence that you see on the on the band indicator chart, this student looks as though they would place a roughly an eight, which is quite high.

  • So you know, we can we can hear and fully understand what the speaker is saying in every part of of this response.

  • Now, one thing I want to point out is that this student separates his speech into different topics, and he uses cohesion to link them together, which I think is a sign that his speaking is at another level compared with the speakers that we heard before.

  • So, uh, you know, when I finish talking about fluency, I'll expand a bit on what I mean by his use of cohesion.

  • His pace is very good.

  • He's not too fast.

  • He's not too slow.

  • He takes very healthy pauses.

  • Uh, there is no real hesitation in his speaking.

  • The only hesitation that is there is very natural that the kind of hesitation that a native speaker would have is they're trying to gather their ideas and deliver a message.

  • So I think this is very good.

  • There is some light repetition and correction, so you can hear you know, towards the end.

  • I Yes, he repeats himself.

  • He has to correct himself in another area.

  • But you know, these things do not distract us as listeners when we listen to him.

  • And so, you know, this would be marked as something more natural, as opposed to something that that that would be, you know, kind of a mistake in his speaking.

  • So So I think overall, you know, his fluency is, uh is quite strong.

  • Now, if we talk about the lexical resources that he uses, I feel these air also quite impressive.

  • Um, you know, it is speaking.

  • He he dropped the word municipal, which sounded like it came out quite naturally.

  • Hey, spoke about, you know, using a couple different technical terms.

  • And it sounded like he did this with a certain degree of ease.

  • It didn't, you know, it didn't sound like he was having to think too hard to find the right words to use.

  • Now.

  • I mentioned before that we were gonna talk about cohesion.

  • So there was one part in his speaking where he said I was an I was an elementary, stupid school students.

  • Then I was an elementary school student Then and then the word you know, the use of the word then indicates that he's linking back to an idea that he brought up in a sentence before it.

  • And it gives, you know, it gives the whole piece kind of feeling like it's like it's working together as opposed to a number of of just sort of start, stop sort of sentences.

  • So he's using these little cohesive raises to kind of make his speech much more fluent, and I think that it comes across quite effectively.

  • Uh, let's see.

  • Ah, again, like some of the other students we've listened to, he doesn't use overly complicated words or words out of context.

  • So all the words that you hear in his response would be words that you know a native English speaker would use when they were talking about the same topic.

  • So I think that that's something else that needs to be remembered when we talk about lexical resources is that he's using, um, you know, uh, appropriate wording to talk about these topics.

  • So that is also quite strong for this individual.

  • Now let's talk about grammar.

  • So the sentence structure that he employs is more advanced than what we heard before.

  • For example, at the beginning, he says, located within a five minute walk away from my house, which, uh, which, you know, this came out quite naturally while he was speaking, and, um and it's it's a phrase that that sounds like something a native English speaker would say.

  • The only small mistake was that he forgot to include the article so located within a five minute walk from my house.

  • But ah, but aside from this, it was, you know, it was delivered quite quite, um, fluently.

  • Most of the sentence is the Actually, the vast majority of his sentences were without any grammatical error So there's another thing that marks him as an 88 band student.

  • Okay, let's talk about pronunciation.

  • So for one, as you probably noticed, his pronunciation is very clear.

  • There's no real point in the recording when when we can't understand what he's saying.

  • He you know, like we pointed out before he tries to correct himself at two different points.

  • But these corrections weren't anything that that that confused us as as listeners.

  • We kind of were ableto we were still able to follow what he was saying in his response.

  • So overall, he's very easy to understand.

  • And a comment I want to make about this speaker is that he has, um, a ah, a highly developed sense of English Internation.

  • So, as we pointed out before, we had one speaker who tended to go up at the end of their sentences, and that made the sentence kind of sound like a question.

  • But if you listen to this individual's response, he tends to go down at the end of his statements, which makes him sound much more like a native English speaker.

  • So s so you know this This comes across quite nicely in his response on.

  • And I think overall, you know his intonation, um, is very effective.

  • And it's, Ah, it sounds like it's coming out quite naturally not.

  • It doesn't sound like it's being forced by him.

  • So I think you'll you'll notice that there's quite a difference between the speaker and the speakers that we heard before.

  • And when I look at the chart across the board, I'd say he's about an eight, which, uh, which is, which is very good.

  • So thank you very much to our friend from Japan for sending in that recording.

  • Now let's listen to a recording sent from a student in Uzbekistan, and now I'm going to tell you about the park, which is very beautiful and which I like very much.

  • It is situated behind the business center and has no road access, So if you want to go there, you have only to go.

  • Are there on food?

  • Each location is quite beneficial for me because it's just 20 minutes on food from my house.

  • I must go there on weekends or just a tenant attack any time when I want to skip this, uh, cities stress and want to breathe in fresh air I, uh There are several reasons why I like this place.

  • First of all, I am an avid brood wrote her and the only sound that has heard there is a birthstone The second, The second is that the atmosphere is there quite calm and displays dazzles me with its unspooled beauty on and off course.

  • The snort reason is that I like the picturesque and unpolluted to river there and the water just call suited my mind on DDE.

  • Of course, I like this place and enjoy with city need regular re because of tranquility, peace and quiet there.

  • And I like the joy of nature on and off course.

  • Is there a marriage also a unique feature?

  • A meal which is just, I don't know, 32 years there, Uh, and it makes me feel that I'm not in my hometown somewhere else and in another time, So it's a little.

  • It's a great way to relax myself.

  • I think this student is quite fluent in there speaking.

  • They are able to speak quite quickly, and it sounds as though they aren't having to think for long periods of time to choose the words that they're going to use to express themselves.

  • So fluency is is not really a problem for this student.

  • What is?

  • The problem is that it sounds as though they I have very bad habits that have perhaps gone on for a while and have not been corrected.

  • So the student makes a number of mistakes as they're speaking.

  • But they don't tend to stop, you know, to to rephrase what they're saying.

  • They kind of just keep talking.

  • And, um and I think that that's a That's a sign that, you know, the student has created some bad habits for themselves.

  • So I hope that you know that the points that I'm gonna share here student kind of, you know, takes that into consideration and tries to break some of those habits that they've created.

  • So I would imagine for fluency that the student would score somewhere around a seven, perhaps perhaps a 6.5.

  • Now, if we talk about the article, the the student uses the word the to describe ah park close to their home.

  • And the interesting thing about the way that they used this article, the is that they use it to describe describe a place that the listener has never been to.

  • So as you know, when you use the word, the this is typically reserved for certain things that both the speaker and listener are familiar with.

  • So you know, when we talk about, for example, Internet.

  • We talk about the Internet because everybody knows we don't say Internet.

  • It's the Internet.

  • But here the suit is talking about a park that we don't know.

  • So as listeners, we have never, you know, we don't know this part.

  • We've never been there.

  • So the student would be better to use the word when they refer to park, uh, at least the first time when they when they introduce it to us.

  • Now let's talk about the lexical resources that the student uses.

  • So there are a couple words that they used that I thought were impressive.

  • So, for example, the students said, I'm an avid bird watcher, which I thought the word avid was quite well placed.

  • However, at other times the student tends to kind of crunch their words together.

  • So at one point they said, the atmosphere is very quite calm, and like I said before this student, they it sounds like they like to speak very quickly.

  • And it sounds like, you know, this is kind of Ah, mistake where they try to crush many words together.

  • So we can't say that something is very quite We can't say very quite calm.

  • We can say very calm or we can say quite calm.

  • But but we wouldn't say the two together.

  • They use some other impressive words like unspoiled, uh, and picturesque.

  • But the problem there was that both words were not pronounced very well, so it was difficult to even know that they used those words.

  • I had to go back and listen again to to kind of pinpoint exactly what they were saying there, but unspoiled in picturesque word nice little additions to their speaking, there were a couple of problems with motels.

  • So, for example, the students said at one point you have on Lee go there on foot, which is you know, Miss, it doesn't really make any sense to see it that way.

  • We would say you can only get there on foot or you could only go there by foot, but we can't say you have only go there.

  • That doesn't make any sense.

  • Uh, another part in the recording, the students said, I must go there on weekends or any time I want to skip this city Stress.

  • Now, of course, the motile must indicates something that you have no control over that it's something that you have to do.

  • So I don't think that the student I was trying to say that somebody is forcing them to go to the to the park.

  • So the word you know the word must is has been used incorrectly here we would say, I like to go to the park on the weekend and in the same sentence, the students said, Skip, I want to skip this city stress and here's skip has been used incorrectly.

  • We would probably say, I want to take a break from the stress of the city.

  • So a couple small lexical resources there.

  • Now let's talk about grammar.

  • I felt the students grammar.

  • According to our files band Descriptors chart is between a six and a seven, so they have many error free sentences.

  • But there are still quite a few sentences in the response that are grammatically incorrect.

  • So, for example, the students said I enjoyed visiting it regularly because of tranquility, peace and quiet there.

  • So you know here.

  • I'm not sure why the student used the word there at the end of this sentence.

  • We already knew they were talking about the park because they used the word it.

  • I enjoyed visiting it regularly because of tranquility, peace and quiet.

  • Now the sentence itself is sort of phrased awkwardly.

  • We'd probably say I enjoy visiting.

  • It's regularly because of its tranquility, peace and quiet or something like.

  • I enjoy visiting its regularly because of the tranquility, peace and quiet.

  • I can find their or something like a little bit, little bit clearer now.

  • There was a point in the response from the students said.

  • It makes me feel I am not in my hometown somewhere else in another time.

  • And here the student has left out conjunctions to kind of show the relationship between these different ideas.

  • So that sentence should read.

  • It makes me feel I am not to my hometown, but somewhere else, or in another time.

  • So to show the relationship, we would need the words but and or and the last sentence the student shares is, it's a great way to relax myself, and this is a very common mistake.

  • Where students students say things like to relax myself or two to improve myself or two, uh, to help myself.

  • You know these air awkward.

  • We'd probably say something like It's a great place to relax or it's a place that relaxes me.

  • Now if we talk about the students pronunciation, I think pronunciation is probably the weakest part of this student's speaking.

  • Um, the problem is that the students pronunciation is eso week at certain points that it actually it hurts our ability.

  • It deters our ability to understand what they're trying to say.

  • So, of course, this is a big problem.

  • So, for example, there was one point where the students said there is also a unique feature and a meal, which is just pretty Aris there, and I'm not sure what a meal is.

  • I'm not sure what heiress is.

  • I imagine those air just pronunciation errors that student is making.

  • So of course you know what you know.

  • I mean to two of those in the same sentence and we don't We don't really know what the student is talking about, so so that you know those pronunciation errors.

  • Of course, that affects the coherence of the entire thing.

  • So that will bring down the fluency and coherence.

  • Marcas well, So overall, I think the student presents traits of both a six and a seven.

  • So I don't think that they're entirely a seven level.

  • But I also don't think that they're entirely 1/6 level.

  • So I would imagine this student would score somewhere around a 6.5 if they were to perform in this way on the examination.

  • So thank you to our friend from Uzbekistan for sending in that recording.

  • Okay, Now let's listen to our last contestant in the contest.

  • This is a person from Vietnam, the place that I like very much.

  • Is there our park near my house?

  • I offer and go to this park on the weekend in order to relieve, in order to live, not to over less on dhe t o r.

  • Get away from the contraction.

  • The noise pollution off the year of the civilization and open every earth I pick go into the park is also a good way for me to meet the foreign people, especially the English ladies, because because in my area the tourism is apparently developed Sarah go into the park is not only a good way for me to relax, get away from the civilization, but also to our image, my international relationships, and leave that up, Master Q On what I like from this, our place is their atmosphere of this place and their scenery.

  • Beautiful scenery.

  • Okay, eso Now, if we start with just talking about the students overall fluency, I think that you could tell from the recording that that fluency is a weak area for the students.

  • So you can you can hear that this student is pausing at times and trying to think about what they're going to say.

  • And these pauses air unnatural, you know, in their length and the frequency with which they happen.

  • So so that's an indicator that this student is, um is perhaps a little bit weaker in there.

  • Speaking also, the student tends to repeat things as they try to correct themselves.

  • And, um, and this sort of happens regularly throughout the, uh, the response.

  • So I think that that's another indicator that the student has some improvement to do there.

  • Um, now, if you look at the Fluency column in your chart you can see that there's, Ah, there's apart.

  • There's a sentence that reads, usually maintains flow of speech but uses repetition self and self correction to keep going.

  • And I think that this this sentence matches the students response exactly.

  • And that's at a Level five.

  • So I would imagine the student would get around a five for the fluency portion of their mark.

  • Now let's talk about lexical resources.

  • So, firstly, the students lexical resources are actually not that bad.

  • They use a number of impressive words, So they talked about how meeting meeting people can enrich their lives, which I thought was impressive.

  • They also used the phrase in order to and they used this, you know, somewhat naturally, which, which really helped kind of frame what they were talking about.

  • There are, unfortunately a number of areas where they misuse words.

  • So, for example, they talked about getting away from civilization.

  • But I don't think he quite meant meant to get away from civilization.

  • I think they meant get to get away from the busier parts of the city.

  • So I think that that might have been a little bit misleading in the manor in the way they used the word civilisation.

  • Let's go on to pronunciation.

  • Unfortunately, the students pronunciation is quite weak.

  • Their pronunciation, uh unfortunately, causes the listener to misunderstand what they're trying to say.

  • And this, you know, unfortunately, unfortunately, will affect the mark that the student will receive for coherence and fluency.

  • So so the pronunciation needs to be improved.

  • The student also seems to have some problems with the our sound.

  • So, for example, when they were talking about urban, the urban area urban, we have to hear that.

  • Or so I hope the student can work on that a little bit, too.

  • Uh, there were a couple of Suffolk's used that were shunned.

  • Suffolk's T I O N.

  • And the confusing thing about about these sorts of Suffolk says, is that there sometimes pronounced differently, depending on which word there coupled with.

  • So, uh, the word that I noticed was the word congestion on congestion.

  • Now I think the student is is saying congestion, which is an incorrect use of this Suffolk's and incorrect pronunciation of this Suffolk's.

  • When we say the word pollution, Yes, that's correct, we would say shun, but here we're talking about congestion congestion.

  • So this sum.

  • You know, this is an area that that might need to be improved is when to use one sound and not the other grammar again.

  • Unfortunately, the student has quite a few problems in this area.

  • The students said.

  • What I like about this place is the atmosphere of this place.

  • So here we've repeated the subject that we're talking about twice in the same sentence.

  • There are a few article problems.

  • So the students said In my area, the tourism is very developed, but with the word tourism, he do not use the article.

  • The so we would say in my area, tourism is very developed and again the students that get away from the civilization.

  • This this should just be get away from civilization.

  • There was an error it with a plural, a swell when the student talked about I want to develop my speaking skill.

  • We should be saying I want to develop my speaking skills, so I would think that this student would place somewhere between a five and a six with this response so that they present a number of traits that are very similar to a five.

  • But they also have a few trades that are that are up towards the sixth level.

  • So I would imagine that with a response like this, the student could expect to get about a 5.5 as their mark.

  • So thank you very much to our friend from Vietnam for sending that in.

  • So that can concludes this video regarding the results from last week's essay contest, and I want to thank everybody for sending in there recorded files.

  • I know it takes a lot of bravery to do that and to share your voice with the world.

  • And I hope this video helps you improve in the various areas that I pointed out.

  • So I would like to congratulate our friend from Japan for having the highest speaking mark this time around.

  • And I would like to congratulate all of the speakers for, um for sending in their recordings and allowing me to present them on my block and in this video.

  • So I hope that video helps to clarify a few different areas on how you can improve your speaking, and I hope to see more of you participate in the contests in the future.

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