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  • Hello guys, welcome to my channel

  • Thank you so much for subscribing and commenting

  • and sharing what you think about education abroad.

  • and today I have a guest - Walker

  • who is from the United States

  • and today we're going to discuss motivation letters

  • this is one of the most important aspects when you apply to university

  • and I've gone through this process

  • I wrote 6 motivation letters

  • because I applied to 6 universities

  • and I know it plays an amazing role in the application process

  • We're going to discuss top 5 things you need to consider

  • when writing a motivation letter.

  • So Walker, could you please introduce yourself?

  • I'm American living in Russia

  • Phd in Asian Relation studies from the University of Pensilvania

  • We start in America learning about motivation letters

  • when we're getting ready to go in a camp

  • My friend in New York said that their daugher who is 11

  • has had to write her first motivation letter to go into a private school.

  • As much as we all hate doing it

  • it's an essential part of life and

  • it's selling yourself

  • and showing yourself as individual who's capable of doing something

  • basic part of American culture

  • and something that is spread in the application process

  • around the world and

  • something that any english-language University will require

  • and many others

  • The most important things

  • about a motivation letter

  • is that you look at it as being part of the entire package

  • of your documents which you submit

  • so when you gather these documets together

  • you've got your exam scores

  • for your field

  • or whatever discipline you're entering into

  • you've got your diploma

  • and your grades

  • and your marks

  • and then you have this other part

  • application

  • and sometimes this letter is attached to

  • And the most detailed thing about you as individual

  • is often going to be in this application

  • where they ask questions like "Why do you want to go here?"

  • "what experience do you have?""Do you have work experience?"

  • "what sorts of hobbies do you have?"

  • "What languages do you speak?"

  • All of these things are in the application.

  • Many students make a mistake when they're preparing these letters

  • as they use the application as the basis for the letter

  • They end repeting it

  • repeating half of what they wrote in the letter

  • what you need to look at is

  • look first at the whole documents

  • and imagine that this person in the admission commetee

  • is looking at you and only

  • knows you from these documents.

  • If you imagine yourself as a character

  • that's only knows from this - what's missing?

  • what is where about you that is not in this package?

  • Your voice is missing actually

  • because you have numbers and diplomas

  • but you don't have your voice.

  • Many universities have very detailed application

  • questions

  • that are part of the application

  • and in that case you need to talk about something else

  • in the letter

  • Make sure that the letter is something that supliments

  • the application and doesn't repeat it

  • so it has new information.

  • The second thing is really important

  • you get a picture and it's written precisely

  • to the audience

  • that is going to be reading.

  • a piace of writing

  • and that the people who are there

  • who are on this commetee

  • are going to be attracted by this document

  • to you

  • as a person

  • and this is distinguish to

  • a lot of where you're going

  • if you're going into BA program

  • or you're younger student

  • they're principally interested in you as a person

  • and in you as a potential

  • adult

  • and so it's very important to talk about your hobbies

  • show yourself as being a rounded person

  • that's a common adjective - a well rounded person

  • but if you're going into Master's or Doctor's program

  • they're interested to know exactly how you're prepared

  • and why you're interested in this particular program

  • in this particular field.

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