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welcome to the overview of the total for i_b_t_ independent writing tests
part three
them if i don't part of her three part series
will in reviewing the pros and cons activity
will also discuss a testrake
involving thinking about the logic of the response we give on these particular
tasks
we would then take a few minutes to put it all together that we've learned in
these three videos
give some final thoughts
have been discuss her first homework assignment
can the pros and cons activity teacher s
again being able to think about different perspectives helps us in
making stronger arguments for the opinions in choices we make
if we can anticipate an argument against our choice
then we can better prepare for it
and that's right a better answer
so think of this activity in a way
as two sides of our brain
arguing with each other
to help us form a stronger clearer argument
we also must consider the importance of logic and argument
remember there are no right or wrong answers to these essays since they are
mostly personal choice
but we must make sure if our answer is logical
so again when taking a test we need to think about
well is the response i'm going to give going to be a logical response
let's talk about looking at an essay topic
in some countries teenagers have jobs while they are still stands
do you think this is a good idea
supports her opinion by using specific reasons in details
now first off
this particular essays one in which we have to give an opinion
but notice
it gives a defense essay largely because we have to think
is it a good idea to do this or not
we do have to defendant think about this
of course before we even given opinion it probably is helpful to think a little
bit more about well
what kind of job would be logical for teenagers to have
well here in the united states logical jobs that teenagers have would probably
something involving say retail sales maybe
selling clothes at the mall
working at a movie theaters a ticket taker
cashier at a fancy restaurant
perhaps even helping their parents their parents on a business
working in some sort of service industry may be mowing lawns
or cutting the grass
or other part-time jobs especially ones you do after school
order and weekends
now but would not be logical
well for example most teenage jobs are paid very well
so it would not be logical to say that teenagers can make a lot of money at the
east jobs
also it would not be logical to say that they'd be working full time positions
the question more or less implies
that these students are going to school they are teenagers after all
also we don't think it's heated yours as being professionals yet
they may be learning valuable skills towards becoming professional sometime
in the future
but most of these jobs are you know generally jobs that don't require some
sort of degree
from the university
now why is this important
part of the idea in giving our personal opinion is to demonstrate that we can
some experience with this type of question
because that's perhaps the only way we can show that we fully understand the
topic
i mean after all it's going to be difficult to believe your ideas
if you've never actually done nothing before in your life
so if you try to argue that's a good thing for teenagers to get a job
do you really know what those requirements would be
and think even deeper
do you really know what the difficulties would be for teenagers if they weren't
going to get the job
think about it for a moment
what would be logical in this case
it would be difficult for teenagers because these workers potts' abilities
could conflict with their homework
so their grades might suffer
if you try to argue that their grades wouldn't suffer at all or that they
would have plenty of time to study
that may not be the most logical response
because oftentimes have since teenagers are working after school
they may have to work for five hours
and as we know there are only so many hours in the week
and again oftentimes jobs especially on the weekends may take up lots of her
hours as well
of course another thing we have to think about his teenagers are sometimes
working in areas that could be a little bit dangerous
fast food for example could infer could involve perhaps burning yourself
if you accidentally uh... misquote or over cook some particular item
of course what would not be logical
well for example he would not be logical to argue that one difficult there would
be that they will get paid too much
or that there would be absolutely no conflict between their life
uh... their work responsibilities and their grades
and of course it would be very difficult also argue that their grades with
insufferable
why his logic so important here
we can have a better picture if we really think about all of these
particular factors
so if you are going to argue that
their job would never interfere with their school work
that would perhaps not be realistic and be a very difficult arguments make
because honestly there are only so many hours available in the day and week
so i think that all the ideas we've learned in our in these videos together
polygonal so get another topic
this particular topic
is a defense essay
learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the president
do you agree or disagree
you specific reasons and examples to support your answer
the first thing we have to recognize is what are we agreeing to if we agree with
the statement
well if we agree we're saying the learning about the past
has no value
if we disagree does that mean i have
he has complete value or is more value
for us
or perhaps is that some value
most likely if we disagree
the idea is we can disagree with the word no
and this is an idea will talk about a little bit later in our series
but for now let's make sure were clear
if we agree with the statement
we're going to see the learning about the past has no value
and if we disagree we're going to say that has some value
so first off let's think one of the reasons to agree with that statement
one of the reasons to disagree with the statement
what will be logical points to consider
and what would be points that would not be so launch
is learning from the past valuable or not
let's start by looking at the logical arguments
first off events
hugely tend to echo themselves another words
there are things about different as for the current history that share some
similarities if
not exactly the same ideas
of course another logical thing to think about is
where in the event takes place may also play a part
culture for example
can help of play a very significant role in how the the events peg shaped
of course it would probably not be logical to say that events happen in
exactly the same way over and over
even though there may be overwhelming similarities
clearly the people involved or the events
uh... he even the technologies involved are not the same
so we couldn't necessarily argue that events always happen the same way in and
the exact same detail
and of course it would also be very difficult to say that all cultures of
the same as well
that would not be logical
even though we may have lots of common characteristics short rates
it would not be a good idea to say that we are all the same everywhere
now when it comes to the pro and con arguments
remember that this particular essay
is somewhat backwards when it comes to its organization
if i agree with this statement but i'm saying that
basically learning for the past has no value
but if i'm speaking against the argument
i do think that there is some value to study
so while some of the pro arguments
if we say that learning from the past has no value one of the reasons why i
want to think about is that comparisons themselves are not perfect
and often we misunderstand or unable to interpret the results of historical
events because frankly most people are not experts
so would be very difficult for us to be able to look at all of the details
and thereby make our comparisons most likely
flawed
another issue to think about is that if we follow the pay ast it might prevent
us from seeing new and perhaps more innovative solutions to our current
situation
some people may be to conservatives in their fridge
and it might blind us to think about how we can solve this uh... particular
problem or situation now
of course
we can't recognize that have been some repeat themselves
but on they uh... kansai we can't think about the fact that they do provide some
basic structure
and they did give us an idea of where to begin when trying to solve a martyr
problem
many times it's very scary to try to solve a problem as we know something
about the uh... what history can teach us
and especially if the pass at a negative outcome we can try to work to remedy
that situation using these new tools and technologies
not available at the time
so when you notice both sides do have very valid arguments
the question of course is which one do you think would be easier for you to
make
so some final thoughts and our first set of serious
when dealing with these
uh... writing tasks
in order to write the good response
we must first understand with the topic is asking us anne and we'll refer to
that is the type of essay or type of topic
we have to be able to think deeply about the topic is well and today looking at
the defense essay we usa strategy called looking at the pros and cons
finally we had to think about what what is a logical ideological response and
thinking about the reasons we give for that response
we have to begin by thanking
is this response logical
does it make sense
now it's time for you
to do some homework
at the bottom of this page you will see homework link
please finish this activity before our next on my class
thanks for watching this video
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